A lot can happen over coffee

Tall, slim, dark brown eyes and thick black mane- that was Janvi. The kind of girl that guys look for. But at the moment she was looking into Vishal’s deep black eyes and he was looking into hers. ‘Hosh walon ko kya khabar bekhudi kya cheez hai’, played in the background. The coffee in both the cups on the table had turned ice cold from piping hot. It was like a dream.

‘What are you doing here?’, came an unknown voice breaking their reverie. Janvi turned to see a sweet looking girl sounding equally bitter, standing behind her. It was Gauri, Vishal’s new junior, whom he supposedly, was mentoring.

‘What is the girl doing with you here?’, was her next question and pat came the reply from Vishal “Oh! She is just a friend”. Janvi was shocked. She felt the ground beneath her feet collapse. Was this her boyfriend from five years speaking?

Gauri turned towards Janvi and yelled madly “I know you are his friend and all but what the hell brings you here”.

All the people in the cafe were looking at them, watching the drama unfold. Janvi was too shocked to reply and Vishal just stood dumb.

Tears welled from Janvi’s eyes as the reality of the situation sinked in her mind. Her world had turned upside down. From the past five years her life revolved around Vishal. The day started with him and ended with him. Life without him was unimaginable. She just hoped it was a bad dream but sadly it wasn’t.

Janvi started walking towards the exit. Vishal made no attempt to stop her. Gauri who was silent for a while suddenly threw her arms around Vishal and shouted “Don’t you dare come between us”. Still no response from Vishal. Janvi simply continued walking, her eyes clouded with tears…


16 thoughts on “A lot can happen over coffee

    • It is modified version of a true story. Janvi deserves someone better but was badly hurt after the incident and it took her a long long time to come out of it.

  1. Talk about competition man… you too writing stories Sapna? 🙂

    By the way I think the story looks more like an incidence. Why dont you elaborate? Give a background and a part two. Waiting to hear more of those.

    PS: Personal experience?

    • I think it is more of drawing inspiration than competition 🙂 I can’t give competition to a master story writer like you

      Yeah. It is an incidence and a modified version of a true incidence. Not my personal experience but one of my very close friends.

  2. that’s atouching story.. being crushed ruthlessly.. even though it took time i am glad Janvi has recovered

    part-2 pls?

    PS: mayur see how many writers you have inspired 😉 great going sappy.. looking forward to more posts from you

  3. Poor girl Janvi!. I am Sad. Who the he** was that Gauri!? I did not like her. Alright, I don’t know the situation. But, still, from what I have read, i still do not like her. Gald for Janvi, there was a recovery after the disappointment instead of a disaster!

    • Yeah there was recovery 🙂 In fact she is getting married this Dec to a much nicer guy. This one was nice as well. Didn’t seem like a two-timer. It didn’t exactly happen this way but she found out about it just as suddenly. She had no clue this was on the way.

      • Hahaha…. even I found my ^^ just like that. Planning to marry soon. Not sure when!? We never know who is posted from heaven for us to earth…! Of course, it is definitely in our hands (Or, my hands) to make life beautiful! Hence, i know Kannada, she is from Karnataka, 🙂

        Congratulations to your friend. I am really really happy for her.

      • I have been waiting for that day. A few calendar and event delays! Otherwise, all set. Hahaha… 😀

        Now she is on the way in train to Bengaluru from chennai. Haha… 😀

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